Friday, May 19, 2006

She fades

the rain has taken it's toll
washed away all her scent
her residual images

he is no longer inspired
lost the muse that made him
into the poet he once was

begin the search again?
he contemplates
among the urchins of greed

forgo all formalities
and join solitude
she will never leave me

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5 Comments:

Blogger neicybelle said...

Hello Santiago! I enjoyed reading your blog today! Happy late birthday! Really liked your poem! Thanks for letting me hang out here.

4:37 PM  
Blogger sonrisa morena said...

holy crap!!! santis i loved this!!! sad to say but i totally feel your solitude!!! i'm here for you dude!!!

4:42 PM  
Blogger Santiago said...

Neicybelle-Thanks for stopping by. Mi casa es su casa. Always like the birthday wishes. After all according to Irasali, it is always about me. jajajajaja!!! Hope to see you here more often.

Sonrisa- I am glad you love this one. It was charged with a complex emotion. Thanks for being there for me.

12:47 PM  
Blogger dr.v (Not a narcotic Pez dispenser) said...

hey you!
nice job with this poem

and happy belated bday!

7:50 PM  
Blogger dr.v (Not a narcotic Pez dispenser) said...

and i do like "beautiful girls" ....nice soundtrack too.

and i have a VHS too.....but i also have a dvd player :)

7:54 PM  

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